tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13734864.post2356825556239558090..comments2024-01-04T08:02:29.500-05:00Comments on Attempts: A Poem of My Own Composition (Accidental Poetry Month, Part 22)Stephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16524368948187746248noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13734864.post-89374188354934262652018-09-05T21:52:52.881-04:002018-09-05T21:52:52.881-04:00this poem is nascent... it's taking on 'ha...this poem is nascent... it's taking on 'hard rings of flesh'... keep working on it. It's going somewhere. Its language feels a bit 'precious' at moments... so, do with that what you will. Keep writing Historiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16705161536780649431noreply@blogger.com